Silverelick's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

["ReBirth: Broken Memory" Teaser/Proof of Concept]

This looks pretty good! Few things. Firstly the Sound design is a bit off. It needs better folley. Just out right needs meater sound effects to add that oomf, Also Timing is another thing that needs work. You want to make the hits FEEL like they connect, imagine a you are playing a fighting game and you whiff an attack appose to an attack making contact, you can feel the difference and see it. And finally Lip syncing is WAY off. i get doing the Anime lip flaps, hell I use them in my current projects now, it's easier and gives it that anime feel, but it needs to be synced up. Not to mention the VA's kind of feel like they are just recording with out Visuals, or context so it sounds a bit off.

But Visually, it looks stunning, the art style and the compositing is on point. Just needs Better Sound design, some re-timing, another pass on Voices, and proper lip syncing and this would be absolutely PERFECT.

[Who wants a tootsie pop?]

I had a feeling that was the punchling, but the reaction was just perfect!

[Protein Powder HD]

Nicely done. Punchline kind of came out of left field though, but enjoyable all the same.

[Rubber Hose Feud (toon history drama)]

It's pretty good, very educational, but as an avid Kingdom Hearts Tycoon, fuck you on that slight on the only good thing Disney has going for itself right now.

[Oney Plays Animated: Kickstarter Music]

I noticed this one has differences compared to the Youtube version.

[TD-Manga-ka]

That momemt when you realized that you actually read a bit of Dave's webcomic back in the day and never realized it.

Raziberry responds:

OH NO

[Africa Dudes]

It's a Shame that the Long version is gone and we can't watch it anymore. I didn't earn those 3 Medals with just Stamper's short! Fix this Tom!

[My Husband Betrayed Me Over Chicken! Storytime]

Husband psychologically messing with wife for the lulz, and getting a reaction, pretty standard fair.

All and all, really nice job on this one, it's great to see a Storytime animation with actual work and passion put into it. I really can't wait to see what you can bring to the table next, and don't kill your husband too horribly.

Zippkey responds:

Thank mean a lot thank you I’ll try my best. My only dream is make my own anime one day so StoryTime animation are a good opening door.

[BKNK episode 1]

The art is a bit messy, voice acting is over doing it a bit, the audio mastering could be better, and Timing needs work. All and all decent job, I can see the FLCL homages a mile away, but again the issue of timing and pacing makes this all fall apart honestly. I could excuse a lot of things, but you need to learn how to pace things to help with the flow. I can't really get a feel for what's going on, or who the characters are because it just snaps unceremoniously to the next cut.

Don't let this discourage you, I would like to see more for you, you have a raw talent, you just need polish is all. and probably a better Voice cast.

[Tritoria - Episode 3 Part 1/2 - Roots of the Abyss]

Man, the Animation is top notch, I think the art is a little messy, but hey you are creating you vision all by yourself, and it's great! I'm going to check out the earlier episodes now. Can't wait to see more from this series.