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[Spike's Delicious Murder Mystery]

Nice to see something from you. It's been years. I've actually did a re-watch on some of my faves from you rather recently. Good to see you are still alive.

As for the episode, aside from weird hiccups here and there in terms of glitches with the rigs and things, and sections seeming like they lasted longer then they should, it was a nice lighthearted episode to close off the series. I hope whatever you do from now on works out for you, but I also would like to know what exactly happened during your 5 Year break. But again, nice to see you back Rob.

Bobert-Rob responds:

Hah, yeah, that was one hell of a break. I don't know, life kept sucker punching me. I do have like a dozen started projects collecting dust, most mentioned in the Scrapbook. Mostly games, which are always time consuming for me because bugs are a bitch to fix at times.

[Mickey Goes To Court]

I did understand what you are attempting to go for. Court parody and such. The voice acting is actually rather decent. But I feel like the writing and the animation timing was quite lacking. Timing is a pain to work with, hell I myself struggle with timing as of the moment, but I feel like there where some areas that lasted much longer then it probably should have. Also the punchline was very lacking. Things where not explained very well ether. Was was Dopey stoned? Why was only the murder and the domestic abuse only shown proof of? The Hell was the floating ball? There wasn't really much debate in-terms of Mickey's case ether. It would have been funnier, if Mickey would have attempted to deny more and more evidence of his actions by making up funny stories why things where the way they where. Also the Intro zoom could have been handled a bit better. If you are going to have a foreground with the background and Zoom with it, make sure the different pieces Zoom differently with it. It might of been a case where you should have used something better then a VC if you could.

As for some good, well as stated before the voice acting was decent, and the coloring and the proportions where on spot. But I feel like it point of this parody failed to connect in terms or writing.

FapioIII responds:

Bear in mind that this was bad on purpose (Trust me that’s not an excuse) but I notice that the presentation is extremely esoteric. So if anyone’s interested here’s all of my Mickey Mouse cartoons in their proper order.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V1sADDuMCtc&list=PLqTn6AYeGmI-zRuicolZ-tn5eSpF7UqH3

[UnTown the pyrate pt. 2]

I see a good amount of potentional in this. Like BlackKitsune said, the audio problems are pretty apparent, however if you fix that issue, and probably clean up the art a bit more, this could be a nice running series, also the animation style should make it easier to create episodes. I would love to see where this goes.

PallidCrest responds:

Thank you! and yes haha, I'm getting a bit of some training for good quality mixing, so that issue should change sometime, depends on how much I learn. Anyways, thank you for your feedback :) I realy appreciate it. :)

[Cronikles Short : Creepy]

Well I can see that really took sometime to do. However the animation puppets are sort of ugly and basic, which done with mouse I can understand that would be a challenge. Maybe invest in a tablet of some kind. Also the timing of the jokes and probably a little more character in the main character, maybe making him overly enthusiastic or something probably would added all little more charm to this. All in all 2.5 stars. Nice attempt at making a funny cartoon, but it just falls flat. A for effort though.

X54321 responds:

Thank you for your honesty, I'm still getting into the swing of things here.

[Alien Spike - Page1]

Interesting concept, I would prefer it to be a fully animated cartoon akin to a motion comic, but there is a sort of fan-base to this type of thing. I would recommend adding some voice acting to later iterations of the series. Can't wait to see more!

AlienSpike responds:

I do hope one day to maybe get Alien Spike into full cartoon form but for it's first iteration I have always envisioned it as a comic. Each part will have a flash bit to it like this one for the fun of it. I have tried voice acting before but the time it took to choreograph everything and iron out all the parts was just to much extra work for very little gain. If ever do an extended animation, I will try again.

[CV Halloween 2011 - Demo]

Its Very unpolished...

Also Don't put something Unfinished unless if its in parts or something...

GoticStarfire responds:

This is only a demo, How Randy-Solem?

[Lost No Named Comic 1]

This is awesome!

yay

FlashMakerD responds:

YaY!!! 10 number 2!!! THX FMD ^_^

[Kingdom Hearts Anime pt1]

Very nice!

Very Close to the manga. Could do better on the voice acting but still good!

KobraEditing responds:

Yeah sorry...this was a long time ago. I assure you, I am much better with voices now. Thanks!